20117 이준우 First draft introduction

Your physical features can be identified as identical to that of your parents, like your eyes from your father, and the hair color from your mother. Therefore, nature is defined that human development is predisposed in his DNA.However, your personality and talents may have come not from your father or mother. The environment where you grew up may have a lasting effect or influence on that way you talk, behave and respond to the things around you. Therefore, nurture is defined that human development is influenced by life experience and his environment. Many psychologists have debated a matter of which one is more influenced between nature and nurture in shaping human behavior for a long time. About this matter debated for a long time. I think that Nurture plays more important role in shaping human behavior and characteristic.

1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by describing traits of nature and nurture. Then, I pointed it out that human development and personality may have not come from his parent. 
2. Explains the topic -
In the attention grabber, I introduce simple traits of my topic. In addition, This topic has been debated for a long time, which is 'Which one is more influenced in forming human development and behavior.
3. My thesis -
I think it is clear, direct and obvious.